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If you are triggering the transaction from a gateway script, you might as well just do the sql insert from that script, it will be faster and the entire transaction control and process will be in one place. You can define a named query and call it from that script. Or assemble the query on the fly and use system.db.runPrepUpdate
Additionally, I'm pretty sure you can consolidate a lot of your tag writes into fewer calls to system.tag.writeBlocking. It accepts a list of tags and list of values.